Jump to content

Talk:Leave It All to Me/GA1

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

[edit]
GA toolbox
Reviewing

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:39, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Quite a short article, which I will measure against the GA criteria today. --K. Peake 07:39, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

[edit]
  • Remove venue parameter from the infobox because that is for live recordings
  • Separate the labels using bullet points instead
  • Target Michael Corcoran to Michael Corcoran (musician)
  • Move audio sample to being in the opening section, aligned to the left
Kyle Peake what do you mean by this? The Ultimate Boss (talk) 09:44, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "is the debut single by American actress and singer Miranda Cosgrove featuring Drake Bell." → "is a song by American actress and singer Miranda Cosgrove, featuring Drake Bell, from the Nickelodeon show iCarly's soundtrack album of the same name (2008)." with the wikilinks and target – this is because you are supposed to introduce what album(s) a song is on in the first sentence of the lead
  • "It was written" → "The song was written"
  • Swap the pop song and lead single sentences
  • Target theme song to Theme music
  • "for the Nickelodeon show iCarly." → "for the show."
  • "for soundtrack album of the same name" → "from the album" and maybe mention at the end "standing as Cosgrove's debut release."
  • Swap the music video and Hot 100 position for correct order
  • Wikilink music video
  • "uploaded to Cosgroves" → "uploaded to Cosgrove's"
  • "The single debuted and peaked at" → "The song peaked at"
  • "giving Cosgrove and Bell" → "giving both Cosgrove and Bell"
  • "performed the track during" → "performed "Leave It All to Me" during"
  • "her Dancing Crazy Tour in 2011." → "her debut sold tour the Dancing Crazy Tour in 2011."

Background and composition

[edit]
  • "Miranda Cosgrove was asked by" → "Cosgrove was asked by"
  • Target theme song to Theme music
  • "Cosgrove explained she" → "The singer explained she"
  • "or been a recording studio," → "or been in a recording studio,"
  • "one of Bell's band members." → "one of Drake Bell's band members."
  • "features her former Drake & Josh co-star, Drake Bell." → "features Bell, who co-starred with her in Drake & Josh."
  • The source does not mention the song's genre as being pop
  • There is no info about the comp apart from the above unsourced genre and literally nothing on the lyrics; can you try and add something?

Release and reception

[edit]

Promotion and impact

[edit]
  • Wikilink music video
  • "was later released on" → "was later released to"
  • "headlining 2011 concert tour" → "headlining 2011 concert tour the"
  • "the song at Cosgrove's performance at Club Nokia." → "the song at Club Nokia, with his appearance gathering cheers from the crowd." since this part is mentioned by the source but is missing for some reason
  • "it had been six years since Cosgrove released her extended play, High Maintenance," → "it had been around six years since Cosgrove released her second extended play High Maintenance,"
  • "In April of the same year," → "In April 2017,"
  • "had stated in the past that she" → "revealed that she"
  • Target lip-syncing to Lip sync

Credits and personnel

[edit]
  • Good

Charts

[edit]

References

[edit]
  • Copyvio score looks great at 12.3%; ignore the flagged URL because that is not used anywhere here
  • Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
  • Ref 15 is citing a duplicate URL; use the correct one instead
[edit]
  • Remove this because the music video is linked to from the infobox

Final comments and verdict

[edit]
Done! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 09:44, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The Ultimate Boss With the comment about the audio sample, I meant it should be in the background and composition section on the left. Also, you could definitely do with adding a mention of the lyrics to the lead. --K. Peake 10:14, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake added. How does the article look now? The Ultimate Boss (talk) 10:26, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The Ultimate Boss I copy edited slightly, but it looks good apart from no text on the audio sample detailing the lyrical content; add this since it is sourced in prose, as well as the length of the snippet. --K. Peake 10:30, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake how does it look now? The Ultimate Boss (talk) 10:34, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
✓ Pass, sample text looks good now! --K. Peake 10:34, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Retrieved from "https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Leave_It_All_to_Me/GA1&oldid=1007483017"