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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:11, 11 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Shall be conducting this review as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 12:11, 11 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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  • Irishman, Mexican, Bulgarian, Englishman and United States should generally not be linked per MOS:OVERLINK
  • "and come together to proudly represent their respective nations" - banded
  • "The faction primarily feuded with Roman Reigns and was poorly received by critics." - perhaps it would help to briefly state why critics disliked the group

History

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  • Delink United States per MOS:OVERLINK
  • "individual members of The League of Nations also feuded individually with other wrestlers during this period," - try to avoid close repetition of similarly spelled wording such as the one highlighted in bold
  • "Both of these rivalries culminated in matches at TLC: Tables, Ladders & Chairs, where all of the League members successful in their separate singles matches" - repetition of the word "matches"
  • "Sheamus' WWE World Heavyweight Championship run ended the following night on Raw when he lost the championship back to Reigns," - how about changing the word in bold to "title" to avoid repetition of the same word in the same sentence
  • "Del Rio and Rusev were defeated by Big E and Woods in another title match, prompting all four members of The League to attack The New Day after the match." - same issue as above
  • "Their feud with The Wyatt Family was cut short because Bray Wyatt suffered a legitimate injury." - maybe add the event on which Bray Wyatt sustained his injury
  • "Del Rio also confirmed in an interview that the group was finished," - was disbanded,

Reception

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  • "Pro Wrestling Dot Net writer Haydn Gleed criticized how WWE wasted the four men's combined potential" - more formal; squandered
  • "In an interview shortly after his departure from the company," - you mean he left WWE?
  • "caused Alberto Del Rio's stock to drop" - avoid using idioms per MOS:IDIOM and rewrite it so that it is more formal

References

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  • References 3 and 23 are missing the authors and publication dates of the respective articles
  • Reference 9 have the forename and surname in the wrong order
  • The link of Reference 18 directs to another article. Please fix this issue
  • Reference 16 is missing the author and the access date
  • Reference 24 is missing the author who wrote the article
  • International Business Times has been deemed a "generally unreliable source" per WP:RSP. Please replace it where possible with another source that states the information the IBT already verifies

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 13:33, 11 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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