Talk:Lazos y Nudos

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What does the article (or section) do well? The article does a great job of having a good structure and flow. They start off with a brief overview of the artist in general. They then give several sections that dive deeper into the artist's background, their inspiration, and collaborations. The subheading titles make it clear what the topic is and makes the transitions between topics easy to follow.

What changes would you suggest overall? I would just try to add a few more sources to back up the information presented in the article. For example, in the about the artist section, it appears that you may be giving an opinion of your own. If you found a source talking about the artist's meticulous execution it will help make sure that the article isn't biased.

What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? I would just say to add some more sources to back up the information presented. I know that this is a rough draft, I would just keep that in mind when writing the article. Overall, I think that this is a good start and there is still a lot more that you can write about this topic.

Radacktyler (talk) 16:13, 22 October 2021 (UTC)Tyler Radack[reply]