Talk:Lauren Holiday/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 16:00, 1 December 2016 (UTC)
Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR 16:00, 1 December 2016 (UTC)
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Checking against the GA criteria
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- The lead summarises the article but consider merging it into two paragraphs
- "She earned U.S. Soccer Female Athlete of the Year honors in 2014" - this has already been linked in the lead
- " In 2010, Holiday was the second-leading scorer on the team with seven goals in 13 total matches, starting seven" - starting at seven
- "In 2015, Holiday scored the third goal of the 2015 FIFA Women's World Cup Final in the 14th minute of the game" - is there an exact date for this? Or month?
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- No original research found.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
This should be good to go. It is well written, comprehensive and all of the sources check out too. JAGUAR 16:28, 2 December 2016 (UTC)