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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 16:00, 1 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR  16:00, 1 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Checking against the GA criteria

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    The lead summarises the article but consider merging it into two paragraphs
    "She earned U.S. Soccer Female Athlete of the Year honors in 2014" - this has already been linked in the lead
    " In 2010, Holiday was the second-leading scorer on the team with seven goals in 13 total matches, starting seven" - starting at seven
    "In 2015, Holiday scored the third goal of the 2015 FIFA Women's World Cup Final in the 14th minute of the game" - is there an exact date for this? Or month?
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    No original research found.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

This should be good to go. It is well written, comprehensive and all of the sources check out too. JAGUAR  16:28, 2 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]