Talk:Lassie (1954 TV series)/GA1
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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 16:17, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I am reviewing this article and am impressed with how well written it is. And very interesting. My comments are the following:
- Why isn't there anything on the actual dogs that played the role of Lassie. How many, where they came from, who trained them etc.
- There are five fair use images. That is too many for an article. One, or perhaps even two can be justified, but no more than that.
Xtzou (Talk) 16:17, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
- Reduced the number of images and swapped one out to one that showed Pal and Tommy. Miyagawa (talk) 19:47, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
- The dog information is mostly included in the Lassie article, although in this article it's mostly in the three paragraphs of the casting section. Although I did realize that it was missing from the Characters and Cast section, so I added an additional listing there for dog actors as Lassie. Miyagawa (talk) 19:47, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
- Very good. It is a wonderful article. Just two very minor comments:
- Writers - nothing more to say about who they were other than McCarthyism?
- "Lassie portrait friendship ring based on the one Uncle Petrie fashions for Timmy" - on one of the Uncle Petrie fashions for Timmy?
Xtzou (Talk) 12:43, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
- I fixed the above to my suggestion " on one of the". Hope that's right. This is a wonderful and informative article. Xtzou (Talk) 14:24, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused: }
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
- Good work! Xtzou (Talk) 14:24, 19 April 2010 (UTC)