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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 11:30, 24 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Again, the lead is too short.
    • Expanded
  • "Muslim town of Larabanga" ? As I am not sure about whether the word Muslim is appropriate or not, I would advise you to check other Good Articles whether such phrases are used or not.
    • You are right. I have corrected it to Islamic
  • Please link Ghana.
    • Ghana is linked in the lead
  • "According to legend" - it should be according to a legend.
    • Done
  • "Larabanga is one of the eight ancient..." keep this sentence and the next one in a separate paragraph. Because it has nothing to do with Ayuba, where it is stitched.
    • Done
  • Between 1421 and 1970s, isnt there any more details?
    • I found this book reference [1] of 2014 and I have added this reference with some additional text. Otherwise, the book gives almost the same details as already given in the article.
  • "it would stop deterioration"- make it "protect from being getting damaged"
    • Done
  • Please link WMF
    • Done
  • Was Ayuba really the architect which is been mentioned in the infobox?
    • The latest reference of 2014, added now, also gives the name of Ayuba as the likely builder.

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 11:30, 24 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]