Talk:Larabanga Mosque/GA1
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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 11:30, 24 March 2015 (UTC)
- Again, the lead is too short.
- Expanded
- "Muslim town of Larabanga" ? As I am not sure about whether the word Muslim is appropriate or not, I would advise you to check other Good Articles whether such phrases are used or not.
- You are right. I have corrected it to Islamic
- Please link Ghana.
- Ghana is linked in the lead
- "According to legend" - it should be according to a legend.
- Done
- "Larabanga is one of the eight ancient..." keep this sentence and the next one in a separate paragraph. Because it has nothing to do with Ayuba, where it is stitched.
- Done
- Between 1421 and 1970s, isnt there any more details?
- I found this book reference [1] of 2014 and I have added this reference with some additional text. Otherwise, the book gives almost the same details as already given in the article.
- "it would stop deterioration"- make it "protect from being getting damaged"
- Done
- Please link WMF
- Done
- Was Ayuba really the architect which is been mentioned in the infobox?
- The latest reference of 2014, added now, also gives the name of Ayuba as the likely builder.
RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 11:30, 24 March 2015 (UTC)
- @Royroydeb: Thanks for the review.--Nvvchar. 05:58, 25 March 2015 (UTC)