Talk:Landi Arbab

Lets hope if someone can further edit the contents of this page to make it somewhat a good source of knowledge about our village. QaziSohail (talk) 13:16, 11 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Greetings, thanks for your additions! A few pointers: ideally information should be referenced from a reputable publication. Consider using books.google.com to see if any non-fiction works can verify the information you have about the village. Second, when using culturally-specific terms like urs or mazar, either wikilink them so non-Pakistani readers understand what they mean, explain the word in parentheses after, or if applicable use a more general word like "tomb" or "memorial ceremony". One last thing, please do ensure editors don't insert personal bias into the writing. Statements like "a martyr who fought bravely against the Indians" is biased towards the Pakistani perspective. For neutrality consider instead "was killed in the Indo-Pakistani War of 1971. Thanks! MatthewVanitas (talk) 18:53, 11 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]