Talk:Laguna Miscanti
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 05:00, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
I'll look at this tomorrow when I am more awake! — GhostRiver 05:00, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
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Infobox and lede
[edit]- No comma after "of the Antofagasta Region"
- Removed. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- "Miñiques volcano" → "The Miñiques volcano"
- I don't think that a "the" is strictly necessary. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- To be pedantic, the "Antofagasta Region" is not mentioned in the body and is not cited
- Now it is with citation. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- Diacritic needed in "Laguna Miñiques"
Geography
[edit]- Laguna Miñiques should be linked upon its first mention (5,000 tourists) and delinked in the following clause
- It already is in the lead? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
Hydrography and geology
[edit]- "It is a maximally" → "Laguna Miscanti is a maximally"
- Diacritic needed for Cerro Miñiques
- Delink Laguna Miñiques in this section
Hydrology
[edit]- "ranging from the Miocene to Holocene age"
- Not sure that this is correct - Miocene is often a modifier to "age" rather than a proper noun. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
Climate
[edit]- "a little warmer" – can we be more precise?
- No, sorry. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
- Delink Holocene, linked above
- Hyphen to em dash in "late Pleistocene-early Holocene wet period"
Biology
[edit]- Comma after "Widgeonweed grows at the lakeshores"
References
[edit]- The first two sources are inconsistent with the citation style used in all future refs
- All online sources should have access dates, including the journal articles being linked
- I don't think that journal sources get access dates even when linked. I think I got the reports, however. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
General comments
[edit]- Image and map are properly licesned and relevant
- No stability concerns in the revision history
- Earwig score looks good
- Jo-Jo Eumerus I have left additional comments on the sections I did not get to earlier. — GhostRiver 01:33, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- @GhostRiver: I think all is done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- I have made a few additional changes myself; things linked in the lede still need to be linked upon their first mention in the body. In any case, I am passing this article. — GhostRiver 16:40, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- @GhostRiver: I think all is done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- Jo-Jo Eumerus I have left additional comments on the sections I did not get to earlier. — GhostRiver 01:33, 31 October 2021 (UTC)