Talk:La Mordidita/GA1
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 17:27, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- The single cover image requires an alt description
- List "Yotuel Romero" as one of the producers, not just "Romero"
Lead
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[edit]- The infobox states "Latin pop", not just "Latin music" in general
Paragraph 2
[edit]- "It was further performed live during his One World Tour (2015-16)." --> "It was also performed live during his One World Tour (2015-16)."
Background and composition
[edit]- Add a link to A Quien Quiera Escuchar since this is the article's first mention of the album, minus in the lead statements
- Very well-written and good use of quotes; nothing else to add here :)
Critical reception
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[edit]- Please add a topic sentence to this section; thanks
- Reword first statement from Jessica Lucia Roiz of Latin Times praised "La Mordidita" as "sexy... fun... and... addicting"." to "Jessica Lucia Roiz of Latin Times praised "La Mordidita" for being "sexy", "fun", and "addicting"."
Paragraph 2
[edit]- Due to the content in this paragraph, I would consider renaming this section "Reception and accolades" or something along those lines; what do you think?
Chart performance
[edit]- Remove the link to A Quien Quiera Eschuchar please since you will be adding one to the "Background and composition" section
Music video
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[edit]- Reword "The team, consisting of 50 people, went on filming on the streets in the city."; I'm confused by what you're trying to state
Paragraph 2
[edit]- The synopsis of this video has zero sources whatsoever; please add some or else none of this information will be backed up by anything, and may have to be excluded from this article
- Add a space after "bites a street vendor"
Live performances
[edit]- Another good use of of references here :)
Track listing
[edit]- No source for the first digital download, so please add one
End of GA Review:
[edit]Very impressed with the content of the article and the good use of references, however the music video section needs some additional citation to be verified, even though the included information is not false. I will place the article on hold for seven days to allow any changes to be made. Feel free to contact me or ping me with any questions or concerns. Thanks! Carbrera (talk) 18:18, 5 June 2016 (UTC).
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Done except referencing the synopsis for the music video. Based on my knowledge and experience, the synopsis part does not need to be referenced as it can be seen on many other song GAs and FAs. My love is love 00:09, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- @My love is love: I shall looks over it now! Thanks for the quick responses! Carbrera (talk) 00:10, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Carbrera: If still required these two sources can be used to source most of the text. My love is love 00:12, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- @My love is love: I would include them anyway; the more sources the better! Plus the article looks really good! Carbrera (talk) 00:13, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Carbrera: Thank you very much. I added the sources. My love is love 00:19, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- Also, per WP:NATIONALITY, Ricky Martin is an American so the lead needs to reflect that. Best – jona ✉ 00:25, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Carbrera: Thank you very much. I added the sources. My love is love 00:19, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- @My love is love: I would include them anyway; the more sources the better! Plus the article looks really good! Carbrera (talk) 00:13, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Carbrera: If still required these two sources can be used to source most of the text. My love is love 00:12, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- @My love is love: I shall looks over it now! Thanks for the quick responses! Carbrera (talk) 00:10, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
