Talk:La Metálica/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:56, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Will review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 18:56, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Delink Mexican per MOS:OVERLINK
• "She is the current, reigning Mexican National Women's Champion," - incumbent
• "having won the championship in December 2018." - how about changing the text in bold title to avoid close repetition

Professional wrestling career

• "She made her in-ring debut on May 13, 2009, after having trained under Rocky Santana, Sadico, Judas el Traidor, Terrorista, Negro Navarro, Justiciero and Robin Maravilla prior to her debut." - try to reword the text in bold for the avoidance of repetition
• "At some point prior to July 2014," - At an unknown date

CMLL (2016–current)

• "when not needed for CMLL shows." - when she was not needed
• "all risk their masks in a Lucha de Apuestas, bet match." - don't think that the comma is needed here
• "The 14-woman torneo cibernetico match where La Metálica was the second competitor eliminated." - saw La Metálica become the second wrestler eliminated.
• "to become a double champion," - two-time
• "She lost to Dalys in the finals two weeks later." - you mean Daly?
• "Daly originally earned a CMLL World Women's Championship match against Marcela, but Marcela was injured." - try not to use Marcela's name too closely in the same sentence

References

• Reference 13 is missing the author
• Reference 16 is dead and will need archiving

Am placing the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the above responses. MWright96 (talk) 19:57, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

• MWright96 I have fixed all issues except one. two-time champion is wrong in this case, because she would hold both the Mexican National Women's Championship AND the CMLL World Women's Championship. Everything else has been addressed. MPJ-DK (talk) 21:41, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
  • @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 10:14, 18 April 2020 (UTC)