Talk:La Bomba (Ricky Martin song)/GA1
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:32, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
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My first review for any of you in quite some time; this will start today! --K. Peake 08:32, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Cover art caption is not appropriate, as the US release is not called a maxi single anywhere
- Wikilink as samba
- Use bullet points instead for labels per Template:Infobox song
- Wikilink as Draco Rosa
- Shouldn't you write English title as "the Bomb" per the body's stylization?
- Wikilink as Draco Rosa
- "was handled by Porter and Rosa." → "was handled by the latter two." plus this needs to be written out in the body
- Wikilink as samba
- "the music which makes" → "the music that makes"
- Remove comma after rhythm of the dance
- "its danceable rhythm and was highlighted as" → "the danceable rhythm and highlighted it as"
- Pipe Premios Eres to Revista ERES
- "It depicts Martin" → "It shows Martin" to be less repetitive
- "The track was included on" → "The song was included on" and add at the end of the sentence, "while he also performed it..." mentioning other notable performance(s)
Background and composition
[edit]It is fine mentioning the chorus without a source on the audio sample text, but you need to source a melody of the song in prose
Isn't [10] enough for that, it has described the song as "an uptempo dance track". آرمین هویدایی (talk) 11:23, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
- Remove comma after third studio album
- "his record label executives" → "the executives at his record label" then writing the name of his label
- If not every country in South America has a record chart, then write "all South American countries with record charts" instead
- I changed it to "number one in 20 countries" and added another reference for it. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 11:38, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
- This is a sufficient replacement --K. Peake 07:53, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
- "had sold over" → "has sold over"
- The first three sentences of the second paragraph should be merged with the above one per them being background
- Should it be "was" or "is" going before the quote, as maybe the tense should be consistent?
- "The album consisting mainly" → "The album consists mainly"
Wikilink Spanish language
I'm sorry but per MOS:OVERLINK, I think languages should not be linked. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 11:38, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
- Wikilink as samba
- "the Dallas Morning News editor Mario Tarradell also echoed." → "The Dallas Morning News editor Mario Tarradell echoed."
- Shouldn't the writing sentence also mention production credits?
- [17] should be solely at the end of the translated title sentence instead
- Pipe to Bomba (Puerto Rico) should only be on "of the same name"
- The piano part is to do with the music, so should come directly before the writing sentence
Release and promotion
[edit]- Img looks good!
- "was released as" → "was released on CD as" with the pipe
- "fourth studio album, Vuelve, released February" → "fourth studio album Vuelve on February"
- "was released in the United States, by" → "was released in the US by" per MOS:US
- "The music video was filmed in April 1998" → "The song's music video was filmed during April 1998" with the wikilink
- "The visual, also includes a" → "At the beginning of the visual, he appears in a"
- "It was later included" → "The clip was later included"
- Wikilink compilation albums
- Remove the view count since YouTube is constantly updating; you need a source writing it out for verification
Critical reception
[edit]- Newsday review should be in the same sentence as Los 40, using the connective while
- "the album's highlights as did the" → "the album's highlights, as did"
- You do not need to write the before Newsday critic
- "citing the song's lyrics to" → "citing how the song's lyrics"
- "the time, when drinks" → "the time when drinks"
- "saying like it is suggested by the song's title, the track is," → "saying like the title suggests, it is,"
- "acknowledged it as one" → "acknowledged the song as one"
- "from Los Angeles Times described the song as" → "from the Los Angeles Times described it as"
Accolades
[edit]- "on the list of" → "on a list of"
- "listed it among" → "listed the track among"
- Shouldn't you write Premios Eres? Either way, pipe to Revista ERES.
- "Premios" literally means "awards" in Spanish. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 11:50, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
- I did not look into that so thanks for letting me know, also good job on solely implementing the second suggestion here. --K. Peake 07:53, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
Commercial performance
[edit]- "Central American countries including" → "Central American countries, including"
- "it peaked at numbers" → "the song peaked at numbers"
- Does [47] back up all of that sentence and the previous one?
- Yes, all three charts were in one page in the magazine.آرمین هویدایی (talk) 11:52, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
- Pipe on Spanish-speaking countries is not necessary here, as this text is about countries that don't speak it
Live performances and appearances in media
[edit]- Img looks good!
- The source does not mention the Vuelve Tour, plus should this really be surrounded by speech marks?
- The list of tours is a bit excess for ones following "including"; maybe find a source stating that he performed it on all of his tours and then add notable ones after including?
- Unfortunately, I couldn't find a specific source citing that.آرمین هویدایی (talk) 12:12, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
- Good on you to maintain intergrity and not add OR; this reads smoothly without the usage of "including" now! --K. Peake 07:53, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, I couldn't find a specific source citing that.آرمین هویدایی (talk) 12:12, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
- "as part of his" → "as part of Martin's"
- Change Miami, Florida to Miami with no wikilink
- The source does not mention the tour being used for promotion of MTV Unplugged
- "danced to it on" → "did the same on"
- Add the release years of the songs in brackets
- ""Livin' la Vida Loca, to" → ""Livin' la Vida Loca" to"
Formats and track listings
[edit]- No Australian CD or European 12-inch singles are sourced
- The source 19 backs up 😶 The section Tracks include the track listing and formats. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 12:16, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
- Oh thanks, I must have missed that --K. Peake 07:53, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
Credits and personnel
[edit]- Good
Charts
[edit]- Good
Release history
[edit]- Make the rowspan 2 for Columbia Records
- Pipe Promotional CD to Promotional recording
References
[edit]- Copyvio score is not loading, but the article does not rely on quotes so it should be decent
- Pipe A. H. Belo to DallasNews Corporation on ref 14
- WP:OVERLINK of Sony Discos on ref 19
- Pipe Amazon.com to Amazon (company) on ref 20
- WP:OVERLINK of La Nación on ref 21
- WP:OVERLINK of AllMusic on ref 32
- Wikilink Los Angeles Times on ref 38
- WP:OVERLINK of Orlando Sentinel on ref 55
- Pipe Tribune Company to Tribune Media on ref 56
- Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 57
- Remove the publisher from ref 59
- Last name should be followed by first name on ref 60 for consistency
- Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 61 and cite Efe as publisher instead
- Ref 70 is using the wrong archive
- Cite Music & Media as work/website instead on ref 76 and wikilink
Final comments and verdict
[edit]- On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 22:11, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake: Thank you so much for devoting your time on it. It is always an honor for me to have my nominated-articles reviewed by you. I fixed all the issues, I hope I haven't missed anything. If I had, please tell me to fix it. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 12:32, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
- @آرمین هویدایی: ✓ Pass now, that was quick and you provided proper reasons not to implement certain changes; congratulations to both you and Magiciandude on getting this into GA status! --K. Peake 07:53, 17 December 2021 (UTC)