Talk:LUMIO (space mission)
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[edit]The article is well-written and documented and the topic description is very clear.
Just a question. It is not so clear the last sentence: what is the Kalman filter used for? Paolo Gajoni (talk) 12:57, 7 July 2023 (UTC)
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[edit]I see that the mission logo is a .jpg with white background. I think that a .png with transparent background would be better.
In the Scientific Payload section I've added the link to the MegaByte page. I think that the link to the TeraBit page should hav been to TeraByte, but I don't actually know the real amount of generated data and so I can't judge it.
Overall, the topic is well-explained and the goals of the mission are clear.
--mscuttari (talk) 14:26, 7 July 2023 (UTC)
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[edit]Thank you for your article! I found it very interesting even if I'm not in the field. The article is well structured and the text clear. I agree with mscuttari concerning the mission logo. NicolòVarallo (talk) 13:15, 7 July 2023 (UTC)
Observations and suggestions for improvements
[edit]The following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following an expert review of the article within the Science, Technology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in July 2023.
Good work, just a bit too much self-referential. Maybe the author could have added references also from spacecraft subsystems made by from institutions outside PoliMi.