Talk:LLA Azteca Championship/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:19, 24 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Use the plainlist template in the promotion field of the infobox so that CMLL and LLA appear in a unbulleted list

"It was sponsored by TV Azteca Noreste, that televised all championship matches" - who
"as it changed hands each time LLA/ CMLL promoted a title match." - LLA and CMLL
"who was born in 1991 and won the title in September 2012 making him 19 or 20 years old at the time." - If Mistico was born in 1991, he would have been 20 or 21 when he won the title, correct?

"that are used in the storylines presented on their shows, they are not won as result" - the comma should be replaced by a semi-colom
"but the outcome of the matches are pre-determined by their promoters." - better: but their outcome are pre-determined by promoters.
"The championship is represented by a belt for the champion to wear" - incumbent holder
"and by 2009 it was decided to create the "Azteca Championship" - and by 2009, had deided to create the "Azteca Championship",
The entire second background is lacking reliable source(s)

"The Azteca Championship was created in late 2009 with a one-night tournament" - as
"with two six-man tag team matches to reduce the field from 12 to 6." - 12 to 6 wrestlers
"The semi-final match was a torneo cibernetico elimination match" - event
"with three wrestlers in the ring at the same time." - concurrently.
"who was born in 1991 and won the title in September 2012 making him 19 or 20 years old at the time." - same issue as the third query in the lede
"The last champions was Místico," - champion

Monterrey, Nuevo León should be wikilinked the first time it is mentioned, not the sixth

"Místico: 19–20 years" - same query as the third one in the lede and the fifth one in the history section

That is all of the queries I have. Going to put the review on hold. MWright96 (talk) 16:04, 24 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 - thank you for the prompt review. I believe I have addressed all issues except sourcing the second paragraph in "background", I will do some research on that now. MPJ-DK (talk) 16:38, 24 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
MWright96 I looked around for where I found the unsourced "background" section and it does not appear to be a reliable source, so I rewrote it and added a source. I hope that works? and I believe I've addressed all the issues now?? MPJ-DK (talk) 00:00, 28 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 09:49, 28 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]