Talk:Lágrimas Cálidas/GA1

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Reviewer: DivaKnockouts (talk · contribs) 21:47, 29 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Introduction

Okay, the infobox doesn't list merengue as one of the genres but the introduction does. I think tropipop would summarize the article's genre, making the other two, or at least vallenato unnecessary.
I fixed the instance of left out words. Other than that, it seems fine here.

A dude, I want to replace that line "The album experiments with the sound of vallenato, merengue and pop music, which defines its genre as Tropipop". But I have problems to traduce to the spanish to english "El álbum experimenta con sonidos de vallenato, merengue y música pop, los cuales definen su género como Tropipop". Thanks @ DivaKnockouts

I guess this would be considered close paraphrasing. Um, how about "Musically, the album experiments with tropipop, which is composed of the genres of vallenato, merengue, and pop music. — Diva Knockouts 18:59, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Background

This kinds of confuses me: "She met Colombian producer, Jose Gaviria, during her career in television, and they began working on a musical project, but the production was halted, because Fanny was busy in her television career.[1] Eight years later, she reunited with Gaviria to finish this recording." — The infobox and introduction say recording was in 2004. You say here, they reunited to finish the recording. Had recording already begun?

@Erick told me that you speaks spanish. Pues no existe material que de prueba de que se haya grabado algo para Lágrimas Cálidas, solo se sabe que ella había empezado a trabajar por un rpoyecto, que al final quedo en palabras. Y luego ocho años despues se retomó para convertirse en LG. Read the seven paragraph, heeerrrree!

Okay, based on the article it seems that everything is okay. You can keep it like it is, assuming that recording had not already began.

Composition

After the introduction, Fanny Lu should be referred to as “Lu” within the rest of the article (Sound sample description for “No Te Pido Flores”)
“The fifth track, "Cariñito" ("Sweetie"), describes her need for the affection of the person she loves, and her desire to remedy the void left in his heart.” — Is the void left in her heart or his heart?
"Y Si Te Digo" should translate to "And If I Tell You".
"Es Por Ti" should translate to "It Is For You".

Done

Reception

"At the 15th Latin Billboard Music Awards, the album won the best Tropical Airplay Song of the Year, for "Y Si Te Digo"," — This should be moved to the singles section and only talk about the album's success here, since there is a singles section.

Almost done...

Track listing

Looks great here.

Credits and personnel

Wow, very nice here.

References

FN2 — No italics to Allmusic, it is not a printed source.

The template's source don't leave me to change it. "work=Allmusic"?

FN5 — No redlinks, unlink Universal Music Entertainment

Done

FN19 — Billboard.com should appear as Billboard

Done

FN27 — Avoid ALL CAPS

Done

FN30 & 31 — These need to be formatted

Done

FN36, 37, & 38 — These should be formatted better. Check Vamos a Celebrar, for a pretty good example.
Links check out okay

Done

There is some work that needs to be done, however, I will put the article on hold until the issues presented here and at DYK have been resolved. — Diva Knockouts 22:44, 29 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Since the last issue was fixed some time ago, I'll step in and pass the article. Wizardman 02:46, 5 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]