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GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:04, 22 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:04, 22 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 02:23, 22 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
General
  • No copyvio detected
  • No dablinks detected
  • External links are fine
Development
  • Expand WB
  • every women on Charmed "woman"
  • Wikilink Charmed: Season 10 at first mention, it is linked later
Appearances
  • A few words about "the Elders" and "the Avatars"? That would save readers a click
  • Done, but let me know if more needs to be added.
  • The "#" may be confusing
Reception
  • I would say Kyra when I begin the section
  • What exactly is Hypable?

@Sainsf: Thank you for picking up all three of my articles for review. I have addressed your above comments; please let me know if there is anything else I can improve. Aoba47 (talk) 04:22, 22 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your hard work! Promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:30, 22 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]