Talk:Kumari 21F

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Review: January 19, 2016. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 12:14, 19 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'll have this done soon. JAGUAR 12:14, 19 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

"Siddhu realises the same and unites with Kumari after an incident; this is the film's centrepiece" - might sound better as The film's centrepiece revolves around Siddhu's realisation and his attempts to unite with Kumari after an incident
"Neither Prasad nor Rathnavelu charged remuneration for the film" - was charged remuneration for the film
"Siddhu is a chef leading a middle class life with his mother" - link middle class?
"The official soundtrack of Kumari 21F consisting of five songs was composed by Devi Sri Prasad" - The official soundtrack was composed by Devi Sri Prasad and consists of five songs
"and mute several objectionable lines of dialogues" - dialogue (no need for plural)
No dead links

This is an excellent article! I couldn't find many things wrong with it, so it explains the short review. Once all of the above are addressed I'll be happy to promote. JAGUAR 12:48, 19 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]