Talk:Konstantin Mereschkowski/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:31, 21 September 2021 (UTC)

Another! Many thanks again. Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:50, 21 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "his Russian work" is Russian needed here?
  • Cut.

• No reason for those two references in the lead, they can go into the main body if they're not already there.
  • Moved.

• " a Privy Councillor" is there a reason this is capitalised?
  • l/c.

• "famous scientists, publishing on anthropology" who was doing the **

publishing here, it's not clear.

• • Edited.

• "to the paedophilia for" do you mean criminal acts of paedophilia?
  • Edited.

• "classification of the diatoms based " overlinked.
  • Fixed.

• "University, Tatarstan;" I would think that Tatarstan should go after the first mention of Kazan, not here.
  • Done.

• " St. Petersburg" Saint Petersburg for consistency.
  • Fixed.

• "strikingly" according to whom?
  • Glossed.

• "to form chloroplasts.[14][12]" overlinked and ref order.
  • Fixed.

• "sizeable lichen herbarium, containing" lichen overlinked.
  • Fixed.

• "remains at Kazan University. It " overlinked.
  • Fixed.

• "a mutualistic symbiosis between" overlinked.
  • Fixed.

• "and indeed ridiculed" even rather than indeed.
  • Fixed.

• JSTOR is in both italics and not italics in the refs.
  • Fixed.

• Schimper is mentioned in the infobox but not in the article at all.
  • Added mention.

• Likewise Wallin.
  • Added.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:54, 27 September 2021 (UTC)