Jump to content

Talk:Kongō-class ironclad

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

[edit]
GA toolbox
Reviewing
This review is transcluded from Talk:Kongō-class ironclad/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 12:44, 15 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll aim to review this one tonight as well. Miyagawa (talk) 12:44, 15 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, I've given it a read through and there is a couple of very minor issues.

  • In some places you use "Kongō-class" and others simply "Kongō class" (with no dash). Ideally these should be the same.
    • Not exactly, the hyphen is used for compound adjectives like Kongō-class ships, no hyphen is used for Kongō class because there isn't a compound adjective.
  • The individual ships should be linked to in the prose of the main article. I think they both first appear in the third paragraph of Propulsion.

Other than that, awesome work as normal. Always enjoy your articles. Miyagawa (talk) 08:08, 16 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for looking this over.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:15, 16 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]