Talk:Kitumbako

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The article has a lot of good data and gives good history of the site. I really like the hyperlinks to various terms and the in-depth descriptions of the various reasons for the loss of endemic species in the area.

In the first sentence I would explain why the Kitumbako Swamps are usually inaccessible to humans. If this information is available, I would also include the time period of artifacts that we are looking at to help orient the reader. I would also add a section explaining what the findings are and what the significance of the various findings is.

Overall, you did a great job on this draft! I would suggest making it explicitly clear in the first couple of sentences of the “Paleoenvironmental/Paleoecological Investigations” exactly what people are interested in looking at in this area – human artifacts? Ecofacts? I think this will strengthen the overall paper.

I liked how you included hyperlinks of various terms so that people who are unfamiliar with the word can easily become educated – I am definitely interested in adding this to my article! I also liked how you explained the various possibilities for species loss and did not just talk about one reason.

Great draft -- Caroline Carolineholsten (talk) 20:28, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: Introduction to Archaeology

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 17 January 2024 and 29 April 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Ninasdraffen (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Ninasdraffen (talk) 18:23, 21 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]