Talk:Kitty, Daisy & Lewis

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Change Of Tone

"Now in 2011, Kitty Daisy & Lewis have grabbed the musical bull by the horns, producing an exquisite and exciting [...]" I would say this really doesn't meet Wikipedia's standards, and is far too biased for an article. I don't know how I would go about changing it, which is why I am bringing it to the attention of other Wiki users. The whole article is exactly like this. 94.15.207.211 (talk) 19:37, 17 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I just edited the best I could. Whole paragraphs were easily removed due to the tone in which they were written. 94.15.207.211 (talk) 19:44, 17 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]