Talk:Kiribati at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 21:23, 30 June 2018 (UTC)
- I'll take this one. Courcelles (talk) 21:23, 30 June 2018 (UTC)
- "Three athletes from Kiribati were selected to compete in athletics and weightlifting." Needs a re-write to distinguish two athletics competitors and one weightlifter, not three of each or some other possible readings.
- "Kiribati's first Games was in 2004.[2] Kiribati had interest in Olympic participation in the 1980s, and the country later formed their National Olympic Committee (NOC) in 2002, which was recognized by the International Olympic Committee (IOC) in 2003.[3]:311" Like last time, these sentences work better in reverse order. Also might be worth mentioning when Kiribati gained its independence for context.
- Maybe limit the athletics key to only the items you're actually using.
- See WP:PSEUDOHEAD for guidance about the ";Men" and such.
- Not sure "94 kg group." that group is the right word. Perhaps "Men's under 94 kg event"?
- Mention opening and closing flagbearers in the body somewhere, and source them.
Otherwise this is a good piece of work. Courcelles (talk) 21:31, 30 June 2018 (UTC)
- Courcelles Addressed comments. Kees08 (Talk) 02:15, 1 July 2018 (UTC)
- Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 20:48, 1 July 2018 (UTC)