Talk:Kingston Wall

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Article cleanup required

In addition to needing sections, this article suffers from POV praise of the band and other unsourced statements, such as:

"Perhaps even the band name was partially formed out of Walli's surname." (speculation?)
"Petri Walli said in an interview that it was probably the most expensive self-financed album made ever made in Finland"
"Ior Bock, a man Petri Walli knew well and most likely got to know him during his trips to Goa, India"
"All the original Kingston Wall albums and singles under the Trinity label have been since sold out and became precious collector's items"
"he jumped to his death from the tower of Töölö church in central Helsinki"

are subject to verification and require sources to remain in this article.

"unique, hard-edged acid-rock"
"top-notch Finnish artists"
"Kingston Wall was well known from their outstanding live performances"
"the group is considered even by many Finns as one of the country's best hard rock groups"

are POV statements, and should most likely be removed, otherwise backed up with reliable sources.

That being said, there is an impressive amount of information here. I look forward to seeing this article in its neutral and well-sourced form. Eliz81 ^(talk)^(contribs) 23:03, 28 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I tried to make the article a bit more npov. Also removed unnecesary information. I removed the tone tag. Feel free to add it again if the tone is still not correct. --Petska (talk) 18:53, 29 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]