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GA Review

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Passed. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 12:58, 8 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Nominator: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 17:26, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 14:16, 5 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments:

  • We could probably upload a non-free image of him since he is deceased but I understand if you don't want to do that. Some people are hesitant to upload non-free images.
  • I've uploaded several in the past. If I find a good image I'll add one but the online ones all seem to be watermarked and many of the offline ones I've seen are not very good quality scans.
  • Remove stub tag.
  • "nominally attending" I'm not 100% sure what that means.
  • Amended.
  • "but he then got a night-shift job" change got to something else?
  • Is "took" OK?
That works. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 18:43, 5 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • "when he lot that job" change to lost
  • Amended.
  • "garage firm" Does that have a specific meaning or does it just mean the firm was based out of his garage?
  • I amended this after looking at some more soures.
  • "was runner-up in the Empire Amateur Billiards Championship" already linked earlier
  • Not sure if this was changed, but it only seems to be linked here and in the lead.
  • "completing his national service" That's military right?
  • Normally it is. I've wiki-linked the term, and will see if I can get any more info about what Kennerley's service consisted of.
  • He was a munitions worker; I've added that with references.
  • "The Billiard Player, official magazine of the Billiards Association and Control Council" I wonder if the "official magazine of the Billiards Association and Control Council" part shouldn't be placed earlier in the article where the The Billiard Player was first mentioned.
  • Done.
  • "With the revival of snooker in 1968–69" How did it get revived? What happened to it?
  • I've expanded on this - which shoudl help non-snooker-fans!
  • "knockout tournament" link that to Single-elimination tournament if that's what it means.
  • "Round-robin handicap tournament" link to Round-robin tournament
  • Change "Tournament Not Held" to "Tournament not held" four times in the timeline section.
  • Also change "Not Held" to "Not held" twice.
  • Amended per the four points above.
  • Are all the tournaments in the table cited in the body?
  • They weren't, so I've added references to the tables.
  • In lead: " but making the championship record break of 472/" Remove /
  • Done.
  • Body doesn't say where he died.
  • Added.
  • Any more personal or later life? Probably couldn't find anything?
  • No, his obituary in Snooker Scene makes a passing reference that after his first heart attack, he "derived the bulk of his income from a job unconnected with the game" without further details, and I didn't find any other soures.
  • Some of the stuff like "Birmingham Gazette" in the reference section could probably be linked
  • Done.

Spot-checks:

  • "Billiards Expert". Evening Sentinel. Stoke-on-Trent. 9 February 1936
    • Looks good.
  • "Birmingham Man as Billiards favourite". Evening Despatch. Birmingham. 6 March 1936
    • The article says "One of the spectators at the final, Mr. J.C. Pitchford, employed Kennerley, who had relevant experience, as an engineer in his garage firm Richard Lloyd." but I don't see in the ref where it says it was an engineering firm or that he had relevant experience?
    • Everything else for that ref looks good.
  • "Kingsley Kennerley's Fine work". Evening Despatch. Birmingham. 30 August 1939
    • Looks good
  • "Snooker". The Glasgow Herald. 13 May 1954
    • Article says "Kennerley won both his qualifying matches and joined the 1954/1955 News of the World Snooker Tournament" but ref just mentions one person he beat?
    • The Times source had the other reult, but I've changed it to a sure that verifies all of the details (including that there were three players in the qualifying competition)
  • "UK Championship History". World Billiards. Archived from the original on 5 January 2021
    • Looks good.
  • Draper, Roger (28 October 1980). "Davis so quick to make an impression". Coventry Evening Telegraph
    • Looks good.
  • Greaves, Paul (15 March 1982). "It's that man Davis again". Birmingham Evening Mail
    • Looks good.

Great research! Nice article. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 14:16, 5 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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