Talk:Kingdom Hearts HD 2.5 Remix/GA1
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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 17:08, 8 December 2016 (UTC)
Hi, I think this looks ready to become GA but it has few issues that kinda bother me:
- The first two introductory paragraphs say the same but it lacks a clarification. I know what's a Final Mix, but I doubt the common user does it.
- In every section, try to put each game's premise like in Final Fantasy X/X-2 HD Remaster. No sources are required that though
- Lastly, you could divide the reception section into each game like "II Final Mix was well received due to". Avoid using too many quotes. Also, I haven't played these HD games but I heard news that they suffer from long load times. Do the reviewers mention it?
Anyway, just touch those issues and I'll pass it. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 17:08, 8 December 2016 (UTC)
- Ok @Tintor2:, put plot in each section, tried to trim stuff from the intro and add a footnote about final mixes, rewrote most of the reception section to keep only one or two quotes and cut all the scores to keep them just in the box. Also expanded the details of what was said about each game, and I did see something about load time... IGN says it's faster! :) Let me know if you see anything else to fix. Judgesurreal777 (talk) 04:36, 9 December 2016 (UTC)
- Passed.Tintor2 (talk) 14:20, 9 December 2016 (UTC)