Talk:Kingdom Hearts Coded/GA2

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:33, 4 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'll have this finished soon. A day or two at least. JAGUAR 21:33, 4 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"Coded was a Japan-only release announced at the 2007 Tokyo Game Show" - needs italicisation
"Gameplay is mostly puzzle solving, with action-RPG gameplay elements" - reads slightly awkward, how about The game play is centered mostly around puzzle solving, with action-RPG gameplay elements?
"Mini-games and platforming are also featured" - link minigame and platform game
"Tetsuya Nomura decided to create a Kingdom Hearts spin-off for cell phones" - cell phones or mobile phones? Should be consistent throughout
"This leads king Mickey and friends" - This leads king Mickey and his friends?
"The game received mixed reviews, with reviewers praising the graphics and gameplay variety" - 'review' overload, how about The game received mixed reviews, with critics praising? Feel free to ignore this part
"Kingdom Hearts Re:coded had an added system to incorporate multiplayer experiences called "tag mode"" - should be in present tense
"The story was supposed to be "fluid", so not strictly sticking into the chronology of the Kingdom Hearts series" - the latter half sounds a bit unencyclopedic, how about The story was initially supposed to be "fluid" and did not adhere into the chronology of the Kingdom Hearts series
"so the planned expansion to other Japanese phone carriers and to America were not possible" - always prefer 'United States'
No dead links
Dab links OK

I'll leave this on hold until all of the above are clarified. Let me know if you have any questions JAGUAR 20:01, 5 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

All the issues have been addressed, and am happy to conclude that this meets the criteria. Well done!

JAGUAR 17:34, 6 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]