Talk:Killing Time (Star Trek novel)/GA1

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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 15:09, 25 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Passing infobox, lead, plot.

Development

The reality is that most people visiting this article will likely have been directed to it from our article on slash fiction. But for the 2% of visitors who don't know what slash fiction is, I'd suggest defining the genre briefly, somewhere early in this section. No more than a sentence, perhaps even just a fragment separated by a semi-colon, just enough to ensure that all readers up to speed without clicking the link. Not that clicking the link is a big deal, but Wikipedia content is remixed in a lot of alternate formats.

Done - I tracked down a new source, added it... went to save the edit and... realised it was already cited in the very next sentence already! So I didn't add a new cite as the existing one already covered some of the new text. Where I state that Kirk/Spock started the genre, I've added a new cite for that. Miyagawa (talk) 18:20, 25 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Second paragraph quote about looking for questionable material... it's acceptable to italicize a book title even if it's not italicized in the source.

Done. Miyagawa (talk) 18:20, 25 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Passing "Critical reception", "Notes". That said, at your convenience, I'd supplement the Stet reference in The Free Dictionary with some sort of print reference.

Passing References, External links, categories, image licenses. -- Zanimum (talk) 15:09, 25 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for reviewing! Miyagawa (talk) 18:20, 25 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Pass! -- Zanimum (talk) 22:14, 26 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]