Talk:Kill Switch (The X-Files)/GA1
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 03:47, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]- Dablinks:1 - fixed.
- No ext links issues.
- Lead
- Good
- Plot
- Delinked Washington D.C.
- Dl laptop computer
- Dl e-mail
- Dl another words
- Filming and effects
- I assume that The section starting from "The episode's bridge scenes were filmed at the Westham Island Bridge,..." until "...that Mulder discovers was filmed at a historical landmark known locally as "Read House"" are covered by Reference #11. is that right?
- I made some minor edits on the section.
- Themes
- This section will do better of merged with Writing, don't you think?
- Reception
- Some minor edits.
- References
- All good.
Although the sentence "A freelance computer artist created a 3-D image of Scully for the scene where she is fighting the nurses in the virtual hospital." seems to be backed by a valid source (that I can't check), I don't see any 3D, CGI, whatsoever in the scene. I just looked at every frame and I do not think that there was any 3D Model of Scully involved.
I'll wait until my little quaetion is answered to pass the article. —Hahc21 02:07, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
- I merged the Themes with writing and added the ref to the sentence, just to be safe. Thanks for the review!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:18, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
- Amazing! All good. Passed. —Hahc21 04:37, 23 June 2012 (UTC)