Talk:Khraniteli/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:05, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
Basic stuff and comments
[edit]- Add alt text to both images.
- Done.
- Lead and #Context look good.
- Thanks.
- Plot is 444 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
- Noted.
- "entertains them at table" - word missing?
- None that I can see. Maybe this is a British English thing.
- Shouldn't it be "at a table"? Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 03:52, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed.
- Shouldn't it be "at a table"? Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 03:52, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
- Remove the comma after "in the snow to Bree".
- Done.
- Remove the comma after "bridge across a chasm".
- Done.
- Change "realise" to "realize" - AE and consistency.
- Done.
- What is the purpose of the #Crew section. Is this not covered in the infobox?
- Well, the infobox summarizes the key points of the article, several of which are in this section; the section covers also production design and costume design, not in the infobox.
- Well, then I would suggest adding sources for the rest of the crew. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 03:52, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
- Added.
- Well, then I would suggest adding sources for the rest of the crew. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 03:52, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
- Archive sources for future use (you can use this tool or do it manually).
- Done.
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