Talk:Kepler triangle/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: NSNW (talk · contribs) 01:07, 23 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Intro...

Hello! I will be reviewing this Mathematics Article Feel free to come by on my user page or talk page if you want to ask questions. The process of reviewing this article may take ~7 days more or less. Probably less. This is my first time reviewing an article and I'm not very into mathematics so if you can help me in any way possible please do! I will start reviewing the nomination tomorrow as I have personal issues that I need to deal with. — NSNW 01:07, 23 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! Except for one minor point (the reference to Coxeter's circle packing) I hope all the math is at the level of high school geometry, algebra, and trigonometry; I don't think this topic needs anything more advanced than that. —David Eppstein (talk) 02:01, 23 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

This is a very well done article, only a few minor things need to be cleaned up.

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
Complies with all.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
[3] only redirects to a site that requires a license to view the source, it says that those without a license still can access links to them but the site says there are no links to that specific source. This is the first time I've seen a site like this so I may be wrong, but would there be any other way to access this, and if so change to source to make it more accessible?
I don't think there is, unfortunately. (The same review claims to be available on academia.edu but I suspect it may be a pirated copy, in which case we cannot link to it here, and anyway that site also requires registration to see any content.) I think copying and pasting it here would also be problematic with respect to copyright. Wikipedia does not require sources to be available free online, or even online at all. If you have access to a public university library you may be able to view it from there; my university has a subscription, for instance, valid for all campus internet addresses, so if you signed into the internet using campus guest access from anywhere on campus you would be able to see it. —David Eppstein (talk) 22:15, 23 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

And after typing all that, and failing to find any other copies through Google, I found it on Hoyrup's personal site: [1]. Will add link to article. —David Eppstein (talk) 22:19, 23 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Good Work! As this was really the only issue I had with the article I will pass the nomination. NSNW (talk) 22:30, 23 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
Very focused on the topic.
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
No edit wars.
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
This article seems to be easily passable if the above issues are resolved, I will put the nomination on hold so that you can fix the issues.
Updated Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Thanks for fixing the issues and bringing the article up to standard, I will pass the nomination now.