Talk:Kelly Williams

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Review: April 2, 2017. (Reviewed version).

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What team?

Who does Kelly Williams play for? The first line says Barangay Ginebra Kings, but at the bottom it mentions coach Boyet Fernandez who coaches for the Sta. Lucia Realtors. --Bejnar (talk) 14:40, 6 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Better image needed

A better image is needed, especially if the article is to become a Good Article Ethanbas ^(talk) 04:59, 22 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Kelly Williams/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: White Arabian Filly (talk · contribs) 18:23, 31 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Since I've never edited this article before (or anything in this topic area, really) I propose to do this review. White Arabian Filly ^Neigh 18:23, 31 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Review (GA criteria in bold, my judgment of the article in plain text.)

Accurate and reliably sourced. All statements appear to be sourced, and the sources are either news or sports-specific. It would be better if those 3 or 4 refs that are merely a news article header in a link were filled out with publisher.
Broad in coverage. Yes, covers his whole career.
Neutral in tone. Not quiiite there yet, see comment section below.
Stable, no edit wars. No contentious editing on the most recent page of the history, where it matters. (The vandalism and revert are not warring.)
Illustrated with suitable images. Doing this one first because I saw the comment on the talk page. The only picture used here is free. It'd be nice if it was clearer and not so gritty, but since he's still alive we have to use free pictures. (If he was dead, we could argue fair use and upload a better one.) The image can be replaced in the future if somebody takes one that's better and uploads it here, but this one will do in the meantime.
Copyright violation free. Earwig didn't detect any copyvio.

Comments

The section on his amateur career is really too promotional for Wikipedia. Words like, "stellar" and "amazing" shouldn't be used in a good article. I'd recommend replacing them with more neutral wording. If the source says the coach liked something specific about Williams' style of play or something like that, it could be included here. White Arabian Filly ^Neigh 21:45, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the recommendation :D. I fixed the issues. It really looked promotional, and are any further changes to be made? Adityavagarwal (talk) 03:29, 2 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I think it's good to go! White Arabian Filly ^Neigh 21:02, 2 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

White Arabian Filly Thank you for your excellent review and allowing me to correct the article in accordance with GA. :D Adityavagarwal (talk) 01:13, 3 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]