Talk:Keanolani/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

• You may want to expand the lead, possibly including facts about her illegitimacy, or her death.
• Her father's husband Keaupuni was not biological father as was later attested by Mele, a witness in the divorce suit between him and Maheha in 1855. I think this is garbled, I believe it should be:

  Her husband Keaupuni was not the biological father of the baby as was later attested by Mele, a witness in the divorce suit between him and Maheha in 1855.

• @KAVEBEAR: That's all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 11:28, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

  Changed prose as suggested. KAVEBEAR (talk) 16:26, 23 July 2018 (UTC)