Talk:Kay Armatage
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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 5 September 2019 and 4 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Gossipgirl123456. Peer reviewers: RedMatcha, Privacy1548.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:37, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Peer review
[edit]A well-written, well-structured draft overall.
Maybe a few minor revisions are needed:
- IMDb seems not like a proper preference to use.
- It will be better if you add an education section. For example, more details about the her B.A. English Literature (Queen’s University) M.A. and Ph.D. (English, University of Toronto).
- Some sentences could be more neutral. For example, "Though she is no longer a programmer with TIFF, Armatage is now on..."