Talk:Karen O'Connor/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:38, 14 September 2013 (UTC)
Comments
- Not convinced you need "in the sport of ", just "in three day eventing"
- First para, could mix up the "she..." with the odd "O'Connor" just to prevent the repetitive "She... she... she..."
- Caption needs no full stop, nor a repeat of her first name.
- Put (USEA) after "United States Eventing Association" so when you use the abbreviation, it's unambiguous what you mean.
- Did you mean Connemara pony instead of Connemara?
- Worth explaining what a CCI3* (etc) event means for non-experts?
- "CCI2-4*" ->"CCI2–4*"
Mainly trivial, a nice article which I'll put on hold pending the resolution of the above. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:50, 17 September 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review! I believe I have addressed all of your comments above. Dana boomer (talk) 19:54, 17 September 2013 (UTC)