Talk:Karaikudi S. Subramanian/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:06, 22 April 2020 (UTC)

Hi. Working on your corrections. Could you please specify which link is forbidden. I checked the one you had linked, but no warning message is appearing for me. A smooth transition to the site is the only thing I see. Thanks. Mathuriga1 (talk) 14:20, 18 January 2024 (UTC)

An Indian musician.. looks like an interesting article :) I will post my comments soon. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:06, 22 April 2020 (UTC)

Unfortunately this nomination might be a quick fail as there are a lot of issues. Below I have listed the major problems, which must be fixed first before a proper review can be done. I will keep this open for a week anyway for your response in case you wish to work upon these and make this nom a success (this has happened quite a few times in my reviews). Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:28, 23 April 2020 (UTC)

• Entire sections are unreferenced
• A lot of citations need proper formatting
• [1] One of the external links is forbidden
• Prose issues (such as flautist T. Viswanathan clearly should be 'flutist')
• The lead should not have citations unless you have quotes or controversial claims in it, and all its facts should be in the main text.
• Formatting issues ('Correlated Objective Music Education and Training' (COMET) - unnecessary boldface; italics missing in many places with foreign terms and names)
• Refer to the person by any one name throughout once his full name has been taken (here I see all variations of the name used randomly)
• Huge number of duplinks, check using this tool
• The COMET section does not sound very encyclopedic.. might fail the NPOV criterion
• The section headings don't seem to fit well into an encyclopedic article.. at places I feel the language is promotional.

Failing due to inactivity and lots of issues that need fixing. Sainsf (knock knock · am I there?) 07:46, 30 April 2020 (UTC)