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Having just read other Wikipedia articles on Captain Cook and his ship, the events surrounding the captain's death are described rather differently in this article. Furthermore, this article is riddled with grammatical errors and biases. It reads more like a Hawaiian High School student's first draft for history class than a proper article, up to Wikipedia's standards. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 218.153.250.43 (talk) 12:40, 8 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
