Talk:Kai Londo
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Edited subjective and incorrect language
[edit]This article appears to have been written by a nonnative English speaker, as it was full of incorrect pluralization and grammar. It also suffered from the appearance of too many subjective terms, such as introducing Kai Londo as "a ruler of wisdom." Opinions don't really belong in historical encyclopedia articles. There were frequent mentions of how "great" Londo and his deeds were, which though I respect the author's opinion, I removed due to the aforementioned awkwardness. Alexandermoir (talk) 21:42, 24 September 2010 (UTC)