Talk:KZDG/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good.
• Add a serial comma after "CBS Radio".
• Other than that, the lead looks good as well.

History

• "several staff" doesn't sound right as staff already refers to more than one person. Try rewording.
• "Eastern time" → "Eastern Time"
• "new combined" → "newly combined"

• this isn't correct for the particular case, I've left this alone

• "require a divestiture" → "require divestiture"
• Add a serial comma after Ajay Bhutoria.

• Looks like someone added this during the nom—I've trimmed it back but retained one fact with an added source.

• Add a comma after "June 3, 2019" per MOS:DATECOMMA.
• "on August 2018" → "in August 2018"

Transmitter site

• "king tide" should link to king tide.
• "as king tide" → "as a king tide" or "as king tides"

References

• Archive all archivable sources, including that first PDF.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@Some Dude From North Carolina: All the changes should be made. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:15, 26 March 2021 (UTC)