Talk:KNXV-TV/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 13:48, 8 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Links

Prose

Lede

alongside CW - is it not the CW? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:05, 18 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I think the lede should cover at least in part what type of broadcasts are made (this seems like mostly news from a scan). Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:05, 18 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

General

UHF - link? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:12, 18 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"Bluebird of Happy News" - is this a quote? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:12, 18 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
link baseball. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:12, 18 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
In 1981, the Suns signed a 13-year agreement to telecast games through American Cable[12] (resulting in the launch of the Arizona Sports Programming Network), which sub-licensed games to ON TV in part because they had not wired all of the metropolitan area.[13 - this could probbaly be two sentences to avoid the link after a word. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:12, 18 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
1994 United States broadcast TV realignment - the article is no longer at this page. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:12, 18 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The alt of the helicopter image describes it as "black and yellow", I'd say it's also white. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:12, 18 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
everything else looks good. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:12, 18 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Lee Vilenski: Done except for linking baseball, which is probably a common enough term to a US audience that there is no need for a link. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:26, 18 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Review meta comments

I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:48, 8 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.