Talk:KCOS (TV)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Premeditated Chaos (talk · contribs) 08:45, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

Me ♠PMC♠ (talk) 08:45, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

• "However, in 2019, Texas Tech Public Media" - not sure "however" is needed
• Suspect "originally allocated" wants a hyphen, as they're acting as a single idea
• "as it was felt" do we know who by?
  • No
• Do we know what changed by 1970?
  • Not really Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:54, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
• "while activities began in the community" what activities? Fundraising? Building?
• "remainder of the funds" do we know the total cost or just what the community had raised?
• "However, Walton's donation was imperiled" however not needed here either esp at the beginning of a para
• "[18][19][a][21]" this is a total nitpick but shouldn't efns be either at the beginning or the end of a bunch of refs?
• "perceived "liberal" content" v important to reject public TV to own the libs
• "KCOS also was barred under Texas law" - I assume the background is that KCOS, as a public television station, could not get funding from the state but currently it seems to read that KCOS was barred because it was KCOS and Texas was being Texasy
• "As a result, the station" I might split the para at this sentence, as it's kind of large
• Para 2 under growth could maybe use a link to Hispanics and Latinos in Texas?
• Might want to mention that years of the Great Recession, since it's getting to be long enough ago that people might not remember that reflexively (*shudder*)
• Sources reliable, single image non-free and appropriate, no CV/close para. Spot checks turned up no concerns.

That's all I got! Gonna pass it, treat the above as suggestions. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 04:45, 26 August 2023 (UTC)

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