Talk:K-92 (Kansas highway)/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:32, 12 March 2021 (UTC)

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• "44.061" that's a thousandth of a mile, i.e. to the nearest 2 yards, is that level of accuracy real/necessary?
  •  Fixed I agree -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• How do I use ref 1 to verify that information?
  • You would have to get a copy. I just know this is done in most of the GA and FA road articles. -420Traveler (talk) 18:36, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• Three paras for the lead seems overkill, the article probably needs a maximum of two.
  •  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• What's a " military road" ? Is it just a road built by the military or exclusively for use by the military or something else?
  •  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• "tracks the traffic levels on its highways" it's odd, for me I'd expect to see the highway described to me before learning about how much traffic goes along it.
  • I added a few sentences, will this work? -420Traveler (talk) 18:36, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• "12700" normally use a comma to separate thousands here.
  •  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• "2.701 miles (4 km) " this is a bizarre conversion. To the nearest 160cm in miles but the nearest 1000m in km?
  • Should be fixed now? -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• "begins at K-4 northeast" K-4 appears to be linked here although it's mentioned in the previous section.
  •  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• "1.462 miles (2 km)" similar. Indeed if I double the miles I get 2.924 and double the km I get 4 km. Which above was 2.701 miles....
  • Should be fixed now? -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• ".75 miles" leading zero please.
  •  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• "roughly .5 miles" likewise.
  •  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• There are several of these.
  •  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• "Union Pacific Railway" isn't that Railroad?
  •  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• " $11,125 was appropriated" inflate.
  •  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• I would {{nowrap}} the road designations, e.g. I'm seeing K-7 as "K-" and then "7" on the following line which is undesirable.
  •  Fixed I agree. -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• Perry Lake is overlinked.
  •  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• "ribbon cutting" needs a hyphen.
  •  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• "US 54/ K-16 " etc, either spaced both sides or neither, but not just one.
  •  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
• "1: 211,200" why space in this scale?
  •  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 18:12, 14 March 2021 (UTC)

That's it on first run. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 10:58, 14 March 2021 (UTC)

• Ref 2, is broken? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 19:57, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Its an issue with KDOT's website because some days it works and some not, I've had the same problem. Next time it works I will archive it. Just don't know what to do about it today. -420Traveler (talk) 20:35, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
    • Ok, well I'll need to see it up and running (perhaps it's already been archived at archive.org?) before we can progress the review. Let me know. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:41, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
      • It should be working now, KDOT must have added a new link and I changed the link. -420Traveler (talk) 22:10, 14 March 2021 (UTC)

Okay, content with this now. Promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 08:15, 17 March 2021 (UTC)