Talk:Kızılırmak Delta/GA1

GA Review

Unsuccessful. grungaloo (talk) 22:46, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Grungaloo (talk · contribs) 22:46, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Chidgk1, I've taken a look at this and unfortunately I think this is a quick fail. I think it fails criteria 1A and 1B in particular, and needs a lot of work before making it to GA status. The main issues I see are:

Prose is very choppy. It's a lot of short, declarative sentences with no flow between them.
WP:REPEATCITE occurs quite a bit throughout.
WP:OVERSECTION, there's sections that only have a single line in them. Virtually all of "Ecosystems and habitat" could be condensed to a few paragraphs with no subsections.

I think the content is there and there's the potential to meet GA, but not without a significant rewrite. I'd recommend looking at Dilek Peninsula-Büyük Menderes Delta National Park for a good example of the type of prose you should be aiming for. If you need some help with the rewrites, you can put a request in at WP:GOCE.

I hope this doesn't discourage you from continuing to work on this - I can tell you've put a lot of effort. If you'd like, I can provide a more detailed list of things to improve on the article's talk page. grungaloo (talk) 22:46, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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