Talk:Köllnischer Park/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 14:40, 20 August 2012 (UTC)

Lets see. TheSpecialUser ^TSU 14:40, 20 August 2012 (UTC)

• Acres - please use {{Convert}}

•  Already done: converts 1 hectare to 2.5 acres Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

• was redesigned as a public park in 1869–73... - can this be a start of a new sentence?

•  Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

• It is a registered Berlin landmark. - is it possible to fit this in some sentence above to get a good flow?

•  Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

• Any ref for info in th 1st para of "Location and name" ?

• It reads of this excellent map, included in the article Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

• What is now the site of Köllnischer Park lay in the Middle Ages just outside Cölln. - choose another word instead of "What" if possible. Just sounds odd in the start of a para

•  Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

• Caption for 1st image in "Attractions"

•  Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

• Improve caption in "Attractions" section of the other image

•  Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

TheSpecialUser ^TSU 16:24, 21 August 2012 (UTC)