Talk:Käraste Bröder Systrar och Vänner/GA1
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:07, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
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Another review for you! --K. Peake 17:07, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
- Hi, I'll have limited availability for a little while now. Should be able to respond to most items! Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:26, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Why is the cello instrument not sourced in the body?
- It's sourced in the table. I've added it to Lyrics, where Bellman is the source.
- "The epistle is dedicated" → "The epistle is subtitled"
- Edited.
- The wine setting is not directly sourced in the body
- Edited, and added to Lyrics.
Background
[edit]- Good
Song
[edit]Music and verse form
[edit]- Audio sample looks good!
- "each of sixteen lines." → "each consisting of sixteen lines."
- Done.
- Wikilink tempo
- Done.
Lyrics
[edit]- Good
Reception and legacy
[edit]- Pipe to Bellman. Biografin should be on "her biography" only
- Done.
- "Those form one side" → "These form one side"
- Done.
- Merge the Bellman Society para with the above one
- Done.
- "where it is" → "on which it is"
- This is correct in British English.
- Imgs look good, apart from the part where a full-stop is used after an exclamation mark since this works as the ending punctuation
- Done.
References
[edit]- Copyvio score looks totally undetectable!!!
- WP:OVERLINK of Bellman Society on ref 14
- Done.
Sources
[edit]- Good
External links
[edit]- Good
Final comments and verdict
[edit]- On hold until all of the issues are fixed; quite a short review this! --K. Peake 19:51, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
- OK, all done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 20:21, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, another solid job! --K. Peake 07:50, 15 April 2022 (UTC)