Talk:Juuse Saros/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Riley1012 (talk) 23:53, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs)

Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 01:23, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I will complete this review by the end of this week. -Riley1012 (talk) 01:23, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

1. Well-written

Consider breaking up the Becoming the starter (2018–present) even further because it is currently quite long. Maybe 2021-present can be another subsection with a title like Starter (2021-present)
- @Riley1012: do you think I should just break it up by year? I have seen that done before (see Mitch Marner). HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 12:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  @HickoryOughtShirt?4: That works for me. Let me know when this is done, and I'll pass the article. -Riley1012 (talk) 21:27, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  - @Riley1012: done! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 23:14, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Per MOS:ALLCAPS, could the references with all-caps titles (6, 14, 49, and 52) be changed? Done
Saros played his entire youth career and first three professional seasons with hometown club... Add "his" before "hometown" Done
He finished his rookie season with a 17–10–2 record, a 2.62 goals against average, a .915 save percentage. Add "and" before "a .915 save percentage" Done
He began the season as the steadfast backup to Rinne but they transitioned into an even split rather than starter/backup roles as the season continued. Add a comma after "Rinne" Done
Saros finished in fourth place with two first place votes, two second place votes, and eight third place votes. Add a hyphen for first/second/third-place votes. Done

2. Verifiable
Earwig's Copyvio check passed. Sources are all reliable.

Ref 39 needs |publisher=National Hockey League in the citation template Done
There should be consistency in the references on whether it's Sportsnet.ca or Sportsnet Done
Are there sources for the Career Statistics section?
- @Riley1012: At the bottom of the article in external sources it says Biographical information and career statistics from.... HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 12:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Spot check:

No issues: 1, 3, 6, 10, 15, 16, 21, 26, 35, 43, 50, 60, 68, 78, 81, 91, 100, 107

3. Broad

The 2016 IIHF World Championship should be discussed in the body since it's mentioned in the lead Done
Is there anything else of note that could be added to the Personal life section? I noticed in ref. 3 that he has an older brother that could be mentioned. Done

4. Neutral
The article is neutral.

5. Stable
This article is stable day-to-day.

6. Illustrated
The images in the article are free and have relevant captions.

@HickoryOughtShirt?4: Nice article, just a few things that need to be addressed. -Riley1012 (talk) 21:57, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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