Talk:Just Chillin'/GA1
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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 18:31, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- Infobox
- The "length" section needs a {{duration}} template.
- Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 21:59, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
- Lead
"Just Chillin' is a studio album by American guitarist and singer Norman Brown, released in July 2002 through Warner Bros. Records." ---> is this his first, second, third studio album?
- Done. 5th studio album. --Another Believer (Talk) 22:05, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
- "and number fifty on the Top R&B Albums chart. ---> change to "and number 50 on the Top R&B Albums chart." per WP:ORDINAL
- Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 21:59, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
- Composition
- "As its title suggests" ----> borders WP:OR.
- Done. (Removed.) --Another Believer (Talk) 21:59, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
- Reception
- Delink Janet Jackson's "Let's Wait Awhile"
- Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 21:59, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
- Personnel
- Needs a {{col-begin}} template, look at this example for a better understanding.
- Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 19:32, 9 July 2012 (UTC)
- Chart performance
- "In the United States, Just Chillin' reached peak positions of number 198 on the Billboard 200, number two on Billboard's Top Contemporary Jazz Albums chart, number six on the Top Heatseekers chart, number three on the Top Jazz Albums chart and number fifty on the Top R&B Albums chart." ---> this is the same as the lead, change it up. Link all album charts not just one.
- Changed fifty to 50. I linked charts which have their own article; I don't see the need to link charts without an article when "Billboard" is already linked. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Another Believer (talk • contribs)
- References
- FN#2 publisher?
- Unknown. Cannot determine from website. --Another Believer (Talk) 22:08, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
- FN#3 publisher?
- Added. --Another Believer (Talk) 22:08, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
Please fix these before passing. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 18:52, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you for taking the time to offer a review. Much appreciated! --Another Believer (Talk) 22:05, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
- Passing article great work. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 14:58, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.