Talk:Julia Maesa/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 19:32, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:32, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations N
• No Sourcing issuesN

• @Jadd Haidar: There is one missing citation that will need to be fixed. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:20, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

I have removed the Sellars source because it was self-published, and replaced it with a Levick source. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:27, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

• was a 3rd century Augusta of the Roman Empire and a powerful, prominent and influential figure in the empire's politics during the rule of the Severan dynasty. suggest:

  was a 3rd century Augusta (empress) of the Roman Empire and a powerful and influential figure in the empire's politics during the rule of the Severan dynasty.

• She bore him two daughters, Julia Soaemias and Julia Mamaea,[5] who would later both became mothers of emperors Elagabalus and Severus Alexander respectively. suggest removing "both".
• To tie up loose ends as it were, you may desire to mention that Diadumedian was "captured en route in Zeugma, and executed in late June.", you can grab the citation of the Diadumedian article if you add the information.
• @Jadd Haidar: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:34, 30 July 2018 (UTC)