Talk:Judy Johnson/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:04, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

Am going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 17:04, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Early life

• "William Julius Johnson was born in 1899 in Snow Hill, Maryland to William Henry Johnson," - use Johnson's full birth date in the prose
• "Johnson had an older sister Mary Emma and younger brother John" - and a younger brother John
• Wikilink sandlot ball

The Hilldale Daisies

• Use the Template:Convert template on 155 lbs so it is also shown in kilograms
• Inside the park home run is a redirect links that need attention to

The 1930s

• "The team secured the first half championship" - The team secured the first half of the championship
• "and keep Pittsburgh's pennant hopes alive." - kept

Later life and legacy

• Fix the redirect for Baseball Hall of Fame

References

• Once again, please don't use the year when a full date of publication is available in the references.
• Reference 25 is a dead link. Please rectify this issue.
• The publication date in Reference 26 should be spelt out as July 9, 2017 for consistency

Can safely say that this is a well-written article and the only quibbles I have are the minor copy-edits. MWright96 (talk) 11:40, 18 November 2017 (UTC)

MWright96 I think I finished things up. I was unable to find full dates of publication for all the sources but included them where I could. Some of them only had the year and others had nothing at all.TheGracefulSlick (talk) 01:21, 19 November 2017 (UTC)

PS thank you for completing these two reviews with me, especially this one for ol' Judy. Negro league baseball is a sometimes forgotten period of the sport's history, and I respect anyone who helps to rectify that problem.TheGracefulSlick (talk) 01:26, 19 November 2017 (UTC)

@TheGracefulSlick: Thank you for making the suggested changes. And yes can agree with the second part of what you said. This article can now be given the GA symbol. MWright96 (talk) 06:31, 19 November 2017 (UTC)