Talk:Judge, Jury, Executioner/GA1
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 20:35, 10 March 2012 (UTC)
Issues:
- Picture: Give a better rationale for the screenshot
- Should be good now.
- Intro: Explain what Carl's actions are
Done- Plot: "who commends him for his efforts despitedespite having different views" remove one of the 'despite'
- Done
- Plot: "He later proposes that he will to protest against the group if the member have the views." What does this mean? Please re-word
- Done
- Ratings: Explain what the Nielsen ratings means
- Done
That's all! On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 21:08, 10 March 2012 (UTC)
- Should be ready to go now! —DAP388 (talk) 01:45, 11 March 2012 (UTC)
- Looks good, I pass!--Gen. Quon (talk) 16:02, 11 March 2012 (UTC)
Well done! -Another Believer (Talk) 18:57, 11 March 2012 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.