Talk:Joseph Clover (artist)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:03, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Avoid single-sentence paragraphs in the lead, probably needs to only be two paras anyway.
• "his fiancé" shouldn't that be "his fiancée"?
• "the Swedenborgian New Church" I would put "New Church" into the pipe.
• "and Aylsham, the small Norfolk town of Aylsham where" not getting this?
• "a farmer.[5][3] " ref order.
• "the 12 children" twelve.
• "working life in Norwich, from" overlinked.
• "Swedenborgian New Church" link this again first time outside the lead.
• "painted his uncle.[20][15]" ref order.
• "c.1803" space.
• "until 1807.[15] In 1806" repetitive.
• "exceptional".[15][11] " ref order.
• Could link List of mayors of Norwich for lead/body.
• "1796-1832" etc in gallery captions should be en-dash.
• "c.1813" space.
• "Northumberland - August" en-dash.
• "Arms public House" why capital H?
• Year ranges in refs need to be en-dash not hyphens.
• ISBNs should be consistent format.
• "Society 1810-2010. London" en-dash.
• Any watercolourist categories?

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:45, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: All the above have ben addressed. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 08:07, 5 September 2021 (UTC)