Talk:Jordan Williams (linebacker, born 1993)

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Review: November 23, 2017. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:52, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Will look at this article. Comments will be coming soon. MWright96 (talk) 20:52, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead

"Williams played in 44 games, starting 21," - Williams played in 44 games, of which he started 21, Done
Wikilink sacks to Quarterback sack Done
Do the same to practice squad Done

Early years

Fix the redirect links to middle linebacker to Linebacker#Middle linebacker and nose tackle to Defensive tackle#Nose tackle Done
"His junior year," - During his junior year, Done
"His senior season in 2010, he played at defensive end" - this piece of text should read as In Williams' senior season in 2010, he played at defensive end Done
"He committed to Tennessee in October 2010." - spell this out a bit more: He committed to play college football for Tennessee in October 2010. Done

College career

Add the appropriate wikilinks to sacks and pass breakups Done
"He appeared in ten games, with five starts," - reword to Williams appeared in ten games, of which he started in half of them, Done
"Williams played in 44 games, starting 21, during his college career." - Throughout his college career, Williams played in 44 games and started 21 of them. Done

New York Jets

"He was released by the Jets on September 5 and signed to the team's practice squad on September 6, 2015." - change the text highlighted in bold so it reads the following day Done

Miami Dolphins

"He was released by the Dolphins on December 26 and signed to the team's practice squad 'on December 29, 2015." - three days later Done
"He was released by the team on September 3 and signed to the Dolphins' practice squad on September 4, 2016." - the next day Done

Personal life

"Jordan's sister, Janine" - please don't use Jordan Done
"Jordan held the first annual Jordan Williams Skills Camp on July 14, 2016." - same issue as above Done

That's everything I could find in my reading of this article. On hold until all the queries have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 07:18, 21 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Done. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:49, 22 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: Okay then. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:56, 23 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:58, 23 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]